Words and Phrases for Essay 3

On average,

Conventional wisdom shows…

Common sense seems to dictate…

Many people assume…

It’s often said…

At the same time, I believe… I also believe…

When it comes to the topic of… most of us readily agree that, Where this agreement usually ends, how-ever. Is on the question of…Whereas some are convinced that…, others maintain that.

X acknowledges, believes, demonstrate, emphasizes, insists, suggests, urges us to

According to…X writes, In their study, they claim that

I agree that… because my experience…confirms it

I agree that…, a point that needs emphasizing since man people believe…

Though I concede that… I stll insist that…

Yet some readers may challenge the view that…

Of course, many will probably disagree with the motion of…

While it is true that…, it does not necessarily follow that…

On one hand I agree with…, on the other hand,…

X is important because…

Ultimately, what’s at stake here is…

Essay 3 Outline

Jacob Fortner

Janel Spencer

WRT101S

18 April, 2019

Essay 3 Outline

Thesis: Tucson roads need to be repaired to improve our safety, driving conditions, and financial stability.

  1. Why aren’t they fixing road
  2. Pot holes are dangerous and makes driving more hazardous.

A. Causes distraction/obstacle to driver.

B. Can cause vehicular damage leading to a car-on-car collision

  1. Maintaining roads now will save us cost in repairs later.
  2. Spending $1 in preventative repairs saves us the equivalent of $7 of future work
  3.  Repairing road conditions will lead to less vehicular repairs caused by pot holes and cracks.
  4. Solution: We take action and patch holes ourselves
  5. Patch holes ourselves
  6. Buy tools/equipment
  7. Invest 10 minutes
  8. Overcoming Objection of solution
  9. Filling pot holes only takes 10 minutes

1. Just need equipment and knowledge

  • Tools and equipment are cheaper than repair.
  • Tools are cheap
  • Vehicle repairs are expensive.
  • Take Pride in your community!
  • Take pride in yourself and your work for everyone.

Essay 3 Works Cited

Federal Highway Administration. “Daily Vehicle – Miles of Travel by Measured Pavement Roughness / Present Serviceability Rating.” U.S. Department of Transportation/Federal Highway Administration, Federal Highway Administration, Oct. 2015. Accessed Apr. 17, 2019.

Federal Highway Administration. “Miles By Measured Pavement Roughness – Rural.” U.S. Department of Transportation/Federal Highway Administration, Federal Highway Administration, Oct. 2015. Accessed Apr. 16, 2019.

Hoogasian, Zach. “The Pothole Index.” MAP AZ Dashboard, Making Action Possible, 23 Apr. 2015. Accessed Apr. 17, 2019

“The Pothole Facts.” The Pothole Facts. Accessed Apr. 16, 2019

“TRIP Report: Bumpy Roads Ahead: America’s Roughest Rides and Strategies to Make Our Roads Smoother.” TRIP Report: Bumpy Roads Ahead: America’s Roughest Rides and Strategies to Make Our Roads Smoother, Site-K Construction Zone, 14 Oct. 2013. Accessed Apr. 16, 2019

“Tucson’s First 240 Years: A Graphic History of the Old Pueblo.” Arizona Daily Star, Arizona Daily Star, 16 Aug. 2015.

Essay 2 Reflection

I believe essay 2 was productive. It taught me to properly break down and analyze a writing or video. I think it’s beneficial to break down essays, speeches, videos, etc. to further understand them. I think the best way to understand a subject is to dissect it and find the building blocks of that subject.

I learned how to draft a works cited for my essays. It also helped me learn to observation and pick up clues to help me understand the subject. It helped me identify ethos, pathos, and logos on a better level. I also learned the fallacies of an argument various propaganda techniques.

I liked the essay overall. It was a new and I like to try various things. I just rather write my own essay rather than analyze other’s works. Otherwise, I think it was a great topic to focus on.

Essay 2 Final Draft

Jacob Fortner

Janel Spencer

WRT101

27 March 2019

Hit Me with the Truth

            Schools shootings were at an all-time high in 2018. Mass shooting attempts were recorded at 94 attempts while the number of deaths jumped to 55. While most civilians demand gun control or other possibilities to limit mass shootings, nothing has been done. Laws remain unchanged and the number of incidents and shootings only continues to climb. In 2016, George Watsky released a song titled “Stick to Your Guns.” In this song, Watsky portrays powerful imagery pertaining to various perspectives involved in school shootings: he portrays the views of the shooter, the media, and the politicians in mass school shootings. Watsky expresses his argument with facts supported by creative language and empathy.

Watsky appeals favorably to logos and pathos to convince Americans that school shootings are exploited via media and politicians. His target audience are preteens, teens, and young adults since they are the ones who can relate to the subject more than anyone else, as they are in school or college themselves. In the hook of his song, Watsky sings, “You’ve got your finger on the trigger, kid/Line it up, line it up, line it up/and hit me with the truth.” I interpreted this as the shooter is the only one who knows why he shot the school. You can always blame gun control, mental health, or emotional instability, but until you ask the shooter, you can only assume.

            The song begins with Watsky introducing himself as the school shooter while reading the letter he has written before the shooting. He starts off saying, “I’ll be gone when you read this, so I just wanted to say/I’m sorry to the couple decent people who got in the way.” He continues in his letter to state what events lead up to this and why he reacted that way, “I was mocked and ignored/you’re sorry now but talk is cheap, shoulda thought it before/You’re the sorry flock of sheep that made me rot to the core.” He’s insinuating that school shootings are developed from emotional suffering and mental struggles. He also incorporates negative connotation throughout this verse to show the unstable mood of the shooter. The words of the shooter were very remorseful, he apologized and wished he had another option, but this was his only one. He then starts to justify his actions by claiming students treated him harshly and that’s why he had to react the way he did. This verse puts the listener in the shoes of the shooter. It shows his audience that the shooter is still human and has emotional faults like everyone else. Watsky might suggest that if the shooter was guided or counseled, the whole scenario could have been avoided.

            During the opening scene in the video, a kid is shown sleeping in his bed in a dark, faint bedroom. The camera ascends and shows the boy’s dream cloud. The boy is symbolic for the shooter as he is dreaming of how to hurt the other sheep, in school in the story. Inside the dream, Watsky who represents the shooter, is dressed as a sheep herder while reading a children’s book to a flock of sheep. The sheep resemble the school students that potentially bullied or ridiculed him. The book that the sheep herder reads seems innocent, until a closer look is exposed. The book is entitled Dino Wars and it reveals blood and violence within the covers. It has an illustrated T-Rex and Pterodactyl. They seemed disgruntled on the first couple pages until he flips the page and show the T-Rex killing and eating a Pterodactyl. This can be interpreted that the T-Rex, an aggressive carnivore dinosaur, is resembling the shooter. The Pterodactyl, who was less aggressive and only fed on insects or dead dinosaurs, represented his bullies. Considering the Pterodactyls’ diet, you can assume the ones that they bully are emotionally dismal or weak. The fact they are dinosaurs could also suggest it’s showing the aggression between the him and his bullies in the past events. This metaphor can be used to show the mental struggles of the shooter. It shows the viewer the conflictions of emotions going on with the shooter. The book cover could resemble the calm, normal nature on the outside, while the text and illustrations are the shooters unhealthy, struggling thoughts.

            Watsky’s second verse supports his claim that the media takes advantage of the school shooting to gain viewers. The verse itself sounds like an advertisement for the news station. While the news tries to report on one of the students who has been shot, they are also self-promoting simultaneously. He says, “We’re gonna bring you a segment live from her hospital bed/We’ll try to bring you the spin through your preexisting opinions but if we miss it switch it to our sister network instead.” He implies that news networks are just developing stories for views, not for the truth or integrity and that they simply twist the story to appeal to the viewer of the station. He touches on how the news promote their graphics, sponsors, and social media to pull in more viewers as well. While the scenario is partially exaggerated, it’s not false. Most news networks do have sister stations that to appeal to a both sides of the political parties. Television programs are reliant on ratings as well so it’s not uncommon for news stations to report on whatever they can consider news.

            In the video, the second verse contains all but one sheep dying. They died from a fall from a cliff, drowning, bombs, hanging, poison, disembowelment, and gun fire. After each sheep dies one-by-one, it shows the herder mourning the loss of each sheep. I believe this resembles the media covering various types of death as it is a great interest piece for viewers. New stations commonly report on deaths as people are always curious who died and the details of the event. They like the controlled chaos because it’s all real, but safe from their they stand.

            In the final verse, Watsky is speaking from the senator’s voice who appears to be addressing the citizens in a PSA for the shooting. He starts off remorseful, but then goes on to say there’s nothing that could have been done about it: “It’s just the strange inner visions of a deranged individual/Full of rage, full of hate, full of vitriol.” Watsky is arguing that most politicians don’t try to crack down on mental health or gun control. The people have come up with solutions, yet nothing has been implemented. He also uses the incident to reference how his opponent uses it for public appeal: “But I gotta mention that it’s sick and insane/my opponent’s twisting your pain/for political gain, that’s lame.” Watsky is claiming that it is common for politicians to point fingers and voice blame, especially on opposing politicians, but less uncommon for politicians to give a speech and try to speak on behalf of the victims and their family. They usually throw in their speech, “I’m here and my opponent John Doe isn’t, so what does that say to you?” This may influence the viewers to believe that John Doe doesn’t care about the shooting or its victims. I believe this is effective because political blame is casted on the opposition despite your political party or beliefs. It easy to place blame on others when they don’t agree with your argument.

            The clip ends on a stormy night with the sheep herder and his last sheep at the sheep cemetery. The herder reads the sermon for the departed sheep. As the sermon goes on, the sheep start to resurrect from the graves and turn on the living. The herder and sheep are then consumed by the dead sheep and it then cuts to a quick psychedelic-styled art animation. Finally, the herder is shown at the end with him and his sheep floating on a cloud. The cloud turns back into a dream cloud from the kid sleeping in his bed. The kid is awoken, calmly walks off, and the video ends. The music slowly queues out and the video ends. This could mean that the deaths of the other students could have some lingering guilt and that comes back to haunt him. He can’t live with himself as he’s consumed by the zombified sheep. The psychedelic art can be his transition into death as him followed by him and the sheep ascending to heaven. The child leaving after his dream finished could symbolize that he went on to carry out his dream events in real life at school.

            The music video makes the viewer feel sympathetic and gives symbols that the viewer can relate to. The video puts the school shooting in a child-like theme. It starts happy and shows how quickly innocence can be twisted into violence and death. The red eyed sheep that caused all the deaths, was influence from the moment it saw the illustrations from the book. This can suggest that the shooter often reacts from what they see in their everyday lives. This can be caused by violence at home, in movies/television shows, in video games, or any combination of the three. It also gives viewers hope that the dream that the child had, can just be a dream, it doesn’t have to be made into a reality. With some healthy communication and guidance, his emotional instability can be managed into healthier thoughts and dreams. The ending leaves the viewer with a cliff hanger and ultimately lets the viewer decide how it ends. I believe this was intentionally directed this way to show the viewer regardless that the ending to the story is up to them. I believe Watsky wants people take to take action against mass shootings and that we can decide when and how this epidemic will end.

            The audience Watsky appeals to range from teens to young adults. They appeal to his fan base who most likely are attending school or college. They are commonly his fan base and the ones who can closely relate to the subject. One of the techniques he used to sway the audience was the Red Hearing technique. He used this when using the perspective of the news reporter. At first, they brought up the topic of the shooter and an interview with the victim. They quickly move into self-promoting themselves by endorsing their own video graphics, advertisement sponsors, and various social media platforms. Watsky also used the False Dichotomy as the news reporter. He says, “We’ll try to bring you the spin through your preexisting opinions but if we miss it switch it to our sister network instead.” They are giving the viewer only two options to watch for news updates. The Hasty Generalization and Glittering Generalities methods are also used, this time through the perspective of the politician. Watksy starts the verse with two lines of glittering generalities as in lines 5-7, In the first two lines, he comments on how the victims were “innocent” and how the deed was “cowardly”. In lines 5-7, Watsky says “It’s just the strange inner visions of a deranged individual. Full of rage, full of hate, full of vitriol. But I gotta mention that it’s sick and insane…” These lines are full of glittering generalities. The ad hominem was made when Watsky was portrayed as the politician and he bashes the other politician for using the mass shooting for political gain. The politician has no evidence to support his argument.

            “Stick to Your Guns” addresses a lot of controversial standpoints encompassed with school shootings. Watsky used logos and ethos to support and make his argument. I believe his purpose was to show teenagers and young adults the repetitive sequence of events after the school shooting. After each shooting, there is a public news reporting covering anything from the shooter to the victims. You then see the politicians blame one another over the gun policies that they hold true to themselves. Then this is followed up by heated arguments amongst citizens about gun control and which policy to enforce to make sure mass shootings happen again. It feels like a horror film on loop. We see what can be done yet each day that passes, no one has acted on those duties. Watsky depicts this very well in his musical art work and successfully portrays these issues. I think this message was very powerful and effective. It mapped out the entire exploitation of mass shootings as well as it highlighted the key issues that cause mass shootings. Watsky was able to do so while being credible and avoiding any fallacies in his argument.

Work Cited:

Lopez, German. “2018 Was by Far the Worst Year on Record for Gun Violence in Schools.” Vox, Vox, 10 Dec. 2018.

Watsky, George. “Watsky- Stick to Your Guns ft. Julia Nunes [x Infinity]” Youtube. X Infinite, Carlos Lopez Estrada, Kush Mody, 14 January 2017, Link. Accessed 3 April 2019.

3 Topics to discuss for Essay 3

  • Road conditions. I think it’s important to keep our roads safe and preserved. We can graffiti explicit drawings on/round the pot hole so the city must conceal it. This way, they can fill the pot hole and cover the graffiti. We can also be careful of who we vote into office. We should be voting people in representatives who have the similar passion on the same issues us citizens have.
  • Stray Animals. We should be more responsible and compassionate about our Tucson animals. There are many strays and mistreated animals in Tucson. We can always do our part and report mistreatment of animals. We can also lobby for more strict laws for pet ownership and adoption. We can model it after the human child adoption system.
  • Youth Sports. Physical exercise is vital for the youth. It keeps them active, healthy, and focused on a positive goal. Every child should have the chance to engage in whatever activity keeps them mentally and/or physically. We can volunteer our time and work with children or vote in politicians who shares the same values.

Grammar Exercise

Last night, I took out the trash, cleaned the dishes, and ___.

A. my homework
B. finished my homework
C. had finished my homework

Rhetorical Analysis Self-Review

  1. Yes. I think the balance of ethos and logos worked well. It explains the generic topics in the scenario while backing it up with statistics.
  2. Yes, I believe it explains enough about the author, his message, and the audience.
  3. Yes, I believe i provided enough information to inform the reader of the analysis’ purpose.
  4. I believe my goal is clear. To explain the author’s message and his supporting arguments.
  5. I don’t believe I went over the tone specifically. Perhaps I can incorporate that into my next draft.
  6. I believe I provided enough of the song/video to have the reader understand the lyrics and visual depictions.
  7. I do not believe the thesis was supported effectively. I don’t think i incorporated a good thesis, or if I even included one at all. I will shorten my opening paragraph and add a thesis statement.
  8. I do go in depth about the use of ethos and pathos. I could iterate more explanation if I need to as well.
  9. I think the quotes were included fairly well. It wasn’t choppy and was careful not to over-quote the artist.
  10. The analysis did go into depth of the target d demographic.
  11. I could restructure the opening paragraph. It’s lengthy and needs a thesis statement. I also would like to revise my conclusion paragraph
  12. Conclusion was written
  13. I believe the works cited was properly written.
  14. I’m sure I have some errors. I will go over my revised copy and implement those neccesarry changes.

Essay 2 Draft 3

          

Jacob Fortner

Janel Spencer

WRT101

27 March 2019

Hit Me with the Truth

            In 2016, George Watsky released a song titled “Stick to Your Guns.” In this song, he portrays powerful imagery pertaining to various perspectives involved in school shootings. His song portrays the views of the shooter, the media, and the politicians in mass school shootings. Watsky expresses his argument with facts supported by creative language and empathy. Watsky appeals favorably to logos and pathos to convince Americans that school shootings are exploited via media and politicians. His target audience appeals to preteens, teens, and young adults since they are the ones who can relate to the subject more than anyone else, as there are in school or college themselves. Schools shootings were at an all time high in 2018. Mass shooting attempts were at 94 attempts while the number of deaths jumped to 55. While most civilians demand gun control or other possibilities to limit mass shootings, nothing has been done. Laws remain unchanged and the number of incidents and shootings only continues to climb. In his hook of the song, Watsky sings “You’ve got your finger on the trigger, kid. Line it up, line it up, line it up, and hit me with the truth.” I interpreted this as the shooter is the only one who knows why he shot the school. You can always blame gun control, mental health, or emotional instability, but until you ask the shooter, you can only assume.

            The song begins with Watsky introducing himself as the school shooter while reading the letter he wrote before the shooting. He starts off saying, “I’ll be gone when you read this, so I just wanted to say, I’m sorry to the couple decent people who got in the way.” He continues in his letter to state what events lead up to this and why he reacted that way, “I was mocked and ignored, you’re sorry now but talk is cheap [you] shoulda thought it before. You’re the sorry flock of sheep that made me rot to the core.” He’s insinuating that school shootings are developed from emotional suffering and mental struggles. He also incorporates negative denotation throughout this verse to support the mood of the shooter. The words of the shooter were very remorseful, he apologized and wished he had another option but this was his only one. He then starts to justify his actions by claiming students treated him harshly and that’s why he had to react the way he did.

            During the opening scene in the video, a kid is shown sleeping in his bed in a dark, vague bedroom. The camera ascends and shows the boy’s dream cloud. The boy is symbolic for the shooter as he is dreaming of how to hurt the other sheep in the story. Inside the dream, Watsky who represents the shooter in the dream, is dressed as a sheep herder while reading a children’s book to a flock of sheep. The sheep resemble the school students that potentially bullied or ridiculed him. The book that the sheep herder reads seems innocent, until a closer look is exposed. The book is entitled Dino Wars and it reveals blood and violence within the covers. It has an illustrated T-Rex and Pterodactyl. They seemed disgruntled on the first couple pages until he flips the page and show the T-Rex killing and eating a Pterodactyl. This can be transcribed to the T-Rex, an aggressive carnivore dinosaur, is resembling the shooter. The Pterodactyl, who was less aggressive and only fed on insects or dead dinosaurs, represented his bullies. Considering the Pterodactyls’ diet, you can assume the ones that they bully are emotionally dismal or weak. The fact they are dinosaurs could also suggest it’s showing the aggression between the him and his bullies in the past events.

            Watsky’s second verse supports his claim that the media takes advantage of the school shooting to gain viewers. The verse itself sounds like an advertisement for the news station. While the news tries to report on one of the students who has been shot, they are also self-promoting simultaneously. He says “We’re gonna bring you a segment live from her hospital bed! We’ll try to bring you the spin through your preexisting opinions but if we miss it switch it to our sister network instead.” He implies that news networks are just developing stories for views, not for the truth or integrity. They simply twist the story to appeal to the viewer of the station. He touches on how the news promote their graphics, sponsors, and social media to pull in more viewers as well.

            In the video, the second verse contains all but one sheep dying. They died from a fall from a cliff, drowning, bombs, hanging, poison, disembowelment, and gun fire. After each sheep dies one-by-one, it shows the herder mourning the loss of each sheep. I believe this resembles the media covering various types of death as it is a great interest piece for viewers. New stations commonly report on deaths as people are always curious who died and the details of the event. They like the controlled chaos because it’s all real, but safe from their disposition.

            In the final verse, Watsky is speaking from the senator’s point of view who appears to be addressing the citizens in a PSA for the shooting. He starts off remorseful, but then goes on to say there’s nothing that could have been done about it. “It’s just the strange inner visions of a deranged individual. Full of rage, full of hate, full of vitriol.” Watsky talks about how most politicians don’t try to crack down on mental health or gun control. The people have come up with solutions, yet nothing has been implemented. He also uses the incident to reference how his opponent uses it for public appeal: “But I gotta mention that it’s sick and insane my opponent’s twisting your pain for political gain, that’s lame.” It’s common for politicians to point fingers and voice blame, especially on opposing politicians. It wasn’t uncommon for politicians to give a speech and try to speak on behalf of the victims and their family. They usually throw in their speech “I’m here and my opponent John Doe isn’t, so what does that say to you?” This may influence the viewers to believe that John Doe doesn’t care about the shooting or its victims.

            The clip ends on a stormy night with the sheep herder and his last sheep at the sheep cemetery. The herder reads the sermon for the departed sheep. As the sermon goes on, the sheep start to resurrect from the graves and turn on the living. The herder and sheep are then consumed by the dead sheep and it then cuts to a quick psychedelic-styled art animation. Finally, the herder is shown at the end with him and his sheep floating on a cloud. The cloud turns back into a dream cloud from the kid sleeping in his bed. The kid is awoken, calmly walks off, and the video ends. The music slowly queues out and the video ends. This could mean that the deaths of the other students could have some lingering guilt and that comes back to haunt him. He can’t live with himself as he’s consumed by the zombified sheep. The psychedelic art can be his transition into death as him followed by him and the sheep ascending to heaven. The child leaving after his dream finished could symbolize that he went on to carry out his dream events in real life at school.

            The audience Watsky appeals to range from teens to young adults. They appeal to his fan base who most likely are attending school or college. They are commonly his fan base and the ones who can closely relate to the subject. One of the techniques he used to sway the audience was the Red Hearing technique. He used this when using the perspective of the news reporter. At first, they brought up the topic of the shooter and an interview with the victim. They quickly move into self-promoting themselves by endorsing their own video graphics, advertisement sponsors, and various social media platforms. Watsky also used the False Dichotomy as the news reporter. He says, “We’ll try to bring you the spin through your preexisting opinions but if we miss it switch it to our sister network instead.” They are giving the viewer only two options to watch for news updates. The Hasty Generalization and Glittering Generalities methods are also used, this time through the perspective of the politician. Watksy starts the verse with two lines of glittering generalities as in lines 5-7, In the first two lines, he comments on how the victims were “innocent” and how the deed was “cowardly”. In lines 5-7, Watsky says “It’s just the strange inner visions of a deranged individual. Full of rage, full of hate, full of vitriol. But I gotta mention that it’s sick and insane…” These lines are full of glittering generalities. The hasty generalizations were made when Watsky was portrayed as the politician and he bashes the other politician for using the mass shooting for political gain. The politician has no evidence to support his argument.

            “Stick to Your Guns” addresses to a lot of controversial standpoints encompassed with school shootings. Watsky used logos and ethos to support and make his argument. I believe his purpose was to show teenagers and young adults the repetitive sequence of events after the school shooting. After each shooting, there is a public news reporting covering anything from the shooter to the victims. You then see the politicians blame one another over the gun policies that they hold true to themselves. Then this is followed up by heated arguments amongst citizens about gun control and which policy to enforce to make sure mass shootings happen again. It feels like a horror film on loop. We see what can be done yet each day that passes, no one has acted on those duties. Watsky depicts this very well in his musical art work and successfully portrays these issues. I think this message was very powerful and effective. It mapped out the entire exploitation of mass shootings. It highlighted the key issues and used credible arguments and supporting facts to back up his claim.

Work Cited:

Lopez, German. “2018 Was by Far the Worst Year on Record for Gun Violence in Schools.” Vox, Vox, 10 Dec. 2018.

Watsky, George. “Watsky- Stick to Your Guns ft. Julia Nunes [x Infinity]” Youtube. X Infinite, Carlos Lopez Estrada, Kush Mody, 14 January 2017, 3 April 2019.

Audience Analysis and Works Cited

  1. I believed the video’s target audience was intended for teenagers to young adults.
  2. The song is discussing mass shootings and how the media and senators twist them to their advantage to gain popularity. The audience is more likely than not to be informed of the mass school shooting epidemic. Those students can be concerned and interested as they are typically attending school or college.
  3. The audience can benefit from the song by understanding how mass shootings can be exploited for personal gain. It’s necessary to know this because they should be informed to be less naive and learning the motives of figures that could potentially capitalize on events like mass shootings. The difference it could make is motivating more listeners to feel empathetic to the song and take action to prevent events like this from happening.
  4. The audience is at least aware of their situations, if not well informed. Anytime a mass shooting takes place the news reporters are on the story like a kitty on cat nip. They should mostly be sympathetic to the situation as the next unfortunate shooting could take place at their school or college.
  5. The questions the audience should ask is “How do I know a figure is exploiting the shooting?” and “How do I know “What facts do you have to support it?” After listening to the song, they should be informed by Watsky the most common way they use these methods to twist thoughts and emotions into getting the votes and views they want. Some background information the audience might use to back up these claims are the number of deaths annually from school shooting, the viewer ratings from news stations during and after the shooting, and the vote totals from politicians who appealed to mass school shootings to emotionally sway their voters.

Watsky, George. “Watsky- Stick to Your Guns ft. Julia Nunes [x Infinity]” Youtube. X Infinite, Carlos Lopez Estrada, Kush Mody, 14 January 2017, 3 April 2019.

Analyzing Satire Illustrations

2. a) What is/are the topic(s) of the pieces?

-The topic I selected was #2.  Both topics are about education and knowledge.

What might the possible argument(s) of each image be? Write out sub-claims and main arguments for both images. How are they similar/different/the same?

-The first image expresses the idea how different degrees of knowledge effects how a person sees the world. The second image express the idea that indoctrination into the school system is set up to destroy any creativity a person may have. The are similar in that they each focus on knowledge while they are different because one focuses on the school system the other focuses on how knowledge allows us to see the world. 

What evidence is presented? Is it figurative and/or does it point to a reality/real incident to support its case? Does the visual evidence reflect reality or is it exaggerated? What is the reality? If exaggerated, how does the exaggeration work to persuade the audience?

-The first image portrays three different backgrounds, with three different people situated at  each level. The first person standing on the ground has a picture perfect happy background. Representing the fact that ignorance is bless. The next person is standing on a medium level of books with a very dark, and scary background. This represents the idea that with just enough information the world can seem very grim. Finally, the last person is standing on a ton of books with a peaceful and heavenly background indicating that the more information on has the more balanced their view can become. This image is figurative, and is exaggerated. The reality is very close to the artist visual representation because without knowledge people do tend to live in ignorant bliss, while  with some information people tend to not see the bigger picture and what they do see is usually pretty grim, lastly, with an abundance of knowledge people are better able to see the whole and bigger picture which tends to be less scary.

What does it assume? What other possibilities does it not consider?

-The artist does make some assumptions about everyone generally falling in each category. For example, that the uneducated would most likely be ignorant to everything else unless they have access to knowledge. 

How does the illustration appeal to pathos? How does it make the audience feel? Does the feeling they evoke help make their argument?

-The image appeals to pathos by 

Which audience(s) does this speak to? How do you know? Is one more or less persuasive; why or why not; to which audience(s)? How might the visual persuade wider audiences? Which audience(s) does it alienate/ignore?

-This audience would appeal to those with more working knowledge and understanding of the power of education. Those who value education and knowledge would be more willing to take the time to understand the image and make the connections.

2. b) The topic in this piece is education. It is an exaggerated piece about the education system, most likely in the United States. It show four different skeletons of people. All four skeletons are slouched in their chairs while only the first three skeletons have a chair, desk, and book incorporated into the illustration. The first is getting the top of his skull sawed off, the second has a light bulb reveled inside the skull with a hammer near the light bulb. The third skeleton has a broken light bulb from the hammer and is being presented with a graduation cap. The fourth and final skeleton is sitting there with its graduation cap on. Its exaggerated because while a process similar to this might happen in school, it’s not literal. In reality, they do often stigmatize independent thinking and puts you in a “farming system” for education. Most education tells you what and when to learn, which lead us to diminish creativity and originality in society.

The illustration appeal to pathos by illustrating that schools kill individual thoughts. It makes us feel like we have been brought up to act and behave the same way as everyone else, when in fact, we know that to be false. Everyone is unique and has their own thinking/behavioral process. If we encouraged education adapted to the individual, I believe that would help students want to educate and better themselves significantly.

I believe this audience speaks to all of Americans, maybe education systems and students specifically. I think it encourages students to keep their own thought process and depend less on the way schools teach you to think. It could also say to schools to re-evaluate the way we educate our students in school/college. I think they created this piece to raise awareness that we don’t all learn the same way or that we should all learn the same thing. We shouldn’t have schools that work like a factory assembly line, we should have schools that challenge students to think analytically.

*Group work with Islandbutterfly79 who focused on image #1*

Essay 2 Draft 2

Hit Me with the Truth

            In 2016, George Watsky released a song titled “Stick to Your Guns.” In this song, he portrays powerful imagery pertaining to various perspectives involved in school shootings. Watsky expresses his argument with facts supported by empathy and creative language.  His song portrays the views of the shooter, the media, and the politicians. Watsky appeals favorably to logos to convince Americans that school shootings are exploited via media and politicians

            The song begins with a settle intro followed shortly by Watsky’s opening verse. In it, he opens telling the story from the eyes of the shooter. He said, “I’ll be gone when you read this, so I just wanted to say, I’m sorry to the couple decent people who got in the way.” He continues in his letter to state what events lead up to this and why he reacted that way. “I was mocked and ignored, you’re sorry now but talk is cheap [you] shoulda thought it before. You’re the sorry flock of sheep that made me rot to the core.” He’s insinuating that school shootings are developed from emotional suffering and mental struggles. He also incorporates negative denotation throughout this verse to support the mood of the shooter.

            During the opening scene in the video, a kid is shown sleeping in his bed. The camera ascends and shows the boy’s dream cloud. In it, Watsky is dressed as a sheep herder while reading a children’s book to a flock of sheep. The book seems innocent, until a closer look is exposed. The book is entitled Dino Wars and it reveals blood and violence within the covers. It has an illustrated T-Rex and Pterodactyl. They seemed disgruntled on the first couple pages until he flips the page and show the T-Rex killing and eating a Pterodactyl.

            Watsky’s second verse appeals to how the media takes advantage of the school shooting to gain viewers. The verse itself sounds like an advertisement for the news station. While the news tries to report on one of the students who has been shot, they are also self-promoting simultaneously. He says “We’re gonna bring you a segment live from her hospital bed! We’ll try to bring you the spin through your preexisting opinions but if we miss it switch it to our sister network instead.” He implies that news networks are just developing stories for views, not for the truth or integrity. They simply twist the story to appeal to the viewer of the station. He touches on how the news promote their graphics, sponsors, and social media to pull in more viewers as well.

            In the video, the second verse contains all but one sheep dying. They died from a fall from a cliff, drowning, bombs, hanging, poison, disembowelment, and gun fire. After each sheep dies one-by-one, it shows the herder mourning the loss of each sheep. I believe this resembles the media covering various types of death as it is a great interest piece for viewers. They like the controlled chaos because it’s all real, but safe from their disposition.

            In the final verse, Watsky is speaking from the senator’s point of view. The politician seems to be addressing the citizens in a PSA for the shooting. He starts off remorseful, but then goes on to say there’s nothing that could have been about it. “It’s just the strange inner visions of a deranged individual. Full of rage, full of hate, full of vitriol.” He talks about how most politicians don’t try to crack down on mental health or gun control. The people have come up with solutions, yet nothing has been implemented. He also uses the incident to reference how his opponent uses it for public appeal. “But I gotta mention that it’s sick and insane my opponent’s twisting your pain for political gain, that’s lame.” It’s common for politicians to point fingers and voice blame, especially on opposing politicians.

            The clip ends on a stormy night with the sheep herder and his last sheep at the sheep cemetery. The herder acts as the sermon of the departed sheep. The sheep start to erect from the graves and turn on the living. They are then consumed by the dead sheep and then cuts to a quick animation. Finally, the herder is shown at the end with him and his sheep floating on a cloud. The cloud turns back into a dream cloud from the kid sleeping in his bed. The kid is awoken, calmly walks off, and the video ends.

            “Stick to Your Guns” has appealed to a lot of controversial standpoints encompassed with school shootings. Watsky used a lot of logic reasoning to support and make his argument.

Works Cited

Watsky, George. “Watsky- Stick to Your Guns ft. Julia Nunes [x Infinity]” X Infinite, Carlos Lopez Estrada, Kush Mody, 14 January 2017, 3 April 2019.

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